caramel on the nose. The palate soon becomes assertive and resinous with the New Zealand hops balanced by the biscuit malt, The finish is aggressive and dry with the hops emerging over the warming alcohol. The fresh full-flavour natural beer is our tribute to the classic IPAs of yesteryear. The postmodern twist is the addition of amazing fruity hops giving an explosion of tropical fruit flavours and a sharp bitter finish.
Enough to drive one to drink!
Try to make your verbs describe, rather than weighing sentences down with off-putting adjectives and verbs.
Here’s an extract from a ‘Mills & Boom’ type novel
Finally, the moment we had been building up to was upon us, and passed too quickly. Breathlessly we rolled together in the now damp grass. As the last deep orange glow of the long setting sun melted into the darkness of approaching night, we lay there still entwined in an amorous embrace. I kissed her long and lovingly, and whispered reassuringly how good she had been. She tenderly and sensuously licked my ear then whispered……….
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